From uneasy read to marked repair path
The painful version is familiar: you paste the draft into a doc, scroll once, and every sentence seems acceptable on its own. Then the whole thing feels hollow. The buyer cannot see the proof. The client cannot hear the brand. The reader reaches the end and still does not know what to do.
The solved state is visible on the page: claims are underlined, missing proof is named, the source packet sits beside the draft, one voice rule is kept, and the final paragraph tells the reader the next move.